Students' first draft of admission/application essay (e.g., personal statement, supporting statements) with max of 1750 words*
T&C:
Each proofreading package covers up to 1,750 words. If the submitted document exceeds this limit, an additional charge will apply based on the excess word count.
🔹 Additional Fee: IDR 75,000 per extra 100 words
🔹 This fee includes fair compensation for the mentor's extended time and effort.
Clients will be notified prior to the review if their document exceeds the word limit, and payment for additional words must be completed before the feedback is delivered.
This package is tailored for applicants who need in-depth support in refining their personal statement, scholarship essay, or similar application essays. Participants will receive:
✅ Two rounds of detailed written feedback on one essay
✅ One live consultation session (via Google Meet) to discuss suggestions and revisions
✅ Access to Google Classroom for structured communication and submission
✅ Guidance to improve coherence, clarity, and persuasive impact of the essay
By the end of this package, participants will:
Have a stronger, more compelling essay that aligns with scholarship expectations
Understand how to express personal narratives and motivations effectively
Gain confidence in articulating their goals and qualifications through writing
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